Wednesday, September 23, 2009

Informative Prompt

Have you ever asked yourself what you need to do to be a good friend? I've asked myself that question many times. To be a good friend you need to be nice, honest and a good listener. To be a nice friend you help the when they need help. When they ask you if you can help then you either say yes or say no politly. Being honest is a big part in friendship if you are not honest with them then you're not being a friend to them. If they ask you what you think of their outfit then you need to tell them the truth. A good listener is somebody who listens to their friends and helps their friend with their problems. When your friend has a problem then you listen to them and then give them a opinion about what you think about their problem and help them solve it. Being a good friend is being nice, honest and a good listener.

3 comments:

Ashley said...

Very good hook.I think you need to work on a better conclusion but other than that it was informative.
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♥•witmer10•♥ said...

i think u did good with the hook. i think u should work on your supporting details a little bit

Alexandra Nunez said...

Dear Valeria,
WOW. That is very nice. I think that you did good in everything. One thing that i really liked is when you expalined what you need to do to be a good friend. One thing you need to work on is adding more detail. You should add more detail.
Sincerley,
Alexandra nunez